Saturday, January 21, 2012

[animatic v13]

The newest version of my animatic, because it should probably be up here!

2 comments:

  1. Looking good!

    One thing: In the shot where she's leaving her house, she's heading towards the left of the screen. Then in the next shot when she's running into the forest, she's heading to the right. And after that, she's heading to the left again. You end up kind of losing track of where she is, but not in a good way. If you mirror the shot where she's running into the forest, so that she's then running to the left, I think that would solve the problem.

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